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Mirrors

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And the soul lying beyond those shades,
The glittering sparkles, and the waves,
In those particles lies your strength,
Behind this weary off-white silk,
And veils shadow your features grey,

When those tears appear as blades,
And green minds  shadowed in raves,
In this whisky lies your strength,
With every sip you love to drink,
And memories clarify events more,

Can you wake up before you fade,
Before your soul is totally raid,
Regretting and whisky are human's filth,
Wake up!
You're losing more with every blink, and -  
In those tears you drop, you will drown,

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And when you wake up, tell me how does it feel,
Because I need to do what I say,
But I fall even deeper in those memories,
And the mirrors remind me,
Of the being I am, and where should I be..

Tell me how does it feel, and how you overcame it,
Look at your weary self and stare,
Nothing terrifies me more than those memories,
And the mirrors are the place they lay,
Every time I see my scars, I recall the memory,
Of my death day.
Inspired by: Face in the Mirror By `yuumei

:iconthewrittenrevolution: can you get out of your recession?

:iconwriters-workshop: december features "Poetry on You (second person view)"
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I wrote it for a man fell in despair, my feelings are similar but are not the same, the only thing different in here, that this guy recalls memories, but I live in them. My frustration declared a powerful state, threw its anchor in the bottom of my soul. and what can I get but people saying the same thing, Be patient, Yes you can do it!
But I would highly appreciate it, if you told me HOW?"

~GhuneiM (C)
© 2009 - 2024 GhuneiM
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BeccaJS's avatar
One thing I do say to people is get rid of thew subscript- I am reading off a netbook and it makes things tiny!