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how low am i getting down with the sickness,
when my body became a lover to pain,
every piece got a different disease,
i can find my cure no-where,
and knives cut my throat inside,
my breathes are louder that i grasp,
my skin is swallowing white, red and blue,
and my nose is streaming, my blood is trapped,
Can you cure me?
how low am i getting down with this sickness,
when my body became a lover to pain,
every piece got a different color,
i can't find my salvation here,
Stop! this torture and pain, to
survive my illness, with my beats,
screw those feelings, i'm enough bleeding,
with beats of my sickened heart are pressed more,
Can you unchest my soul?
how long, how long, how long, how long, how long,
will it take pressing on my shoulders,
everything in my life is wrong,
when the pain is deeper,
and this illusion is myth,
all the pains i'm getting through
are lies, and the shelter is my mind,
my own brain deceives me, i dunno what's true,
Can you tell me what to do?
i want my eyes back in their cavities again,
to be cured from all this love and all this pain,
to flesh back cage, and step back lungs,
ooo why haven't you stopped the rain,
my sinful hands wash good away,
for deeds i have done once past time, i pay,
give me a reason to stay along, or to trace,
when i missed my own way to misplace.
how low am i getting down with the sickness,
my mind became a deceiver to my own,
illusioned the pain of my body and soul,
and the shelter was washed away,
Can you read my life written on my back bone?
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few words of my suffering, how the trip is getting long, and the tide is getting more day by day, and my life torch is getting fainter the effect of rain.
~ m. ghuneim
~ m. ghuneim
© 2009 - 2024 GhuneiM
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Wow, this is one powerful piece of work.
It grabbed my attention from the start and the imagery is so dark and gripping.
Great work~
It grabbed my attention from the start and the imagery is so dark and gripping.
Great work~